Kári Tulinius ([info]kattullus) wrote,
@ 2005-09-15 13:23:00
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rewrite of Above the Clouds: Table of Cebes




Table of Cebes




summit
summat
sumwat
somwat
somewat
somewhat
         it was somewhat unlikely to work
              a cliff resisting the ocean
                   rockface not crumbling
                     futility as metaphor
                       nothing so much as
                        dim inevitability
                       curving in control
                     a line like smirking
                   this will stand lastly
              love is thus an inevitabile
         something for anywhere to happen
anywhere
anywere
anywer
answer
answer
answer

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[info]mylifeismundane
2005-09-15 07:23 pm UTC (link)
this one's pretty damn awesome, i must say

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[info]kattullus
2005-09-15 08:09 pm UTC (link)
thank you

I was happy with it before, but I knew it wasn't quite right, it looked too messy, but now that I've clarified the line it's a lot better

it makes me happy to know that I wouldn't have been able to create the poem in this way three months ago, but now I can, which gives me a very measurable sense of accomplishment

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