, (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} _ruse) wrote in kattullus, |
Have you ever read any work by d.a. levy? I suggest you check him out; he's not quite so experimental as you in the way he puts words/fragments across the page, but his voice is very similar to this...especially your last stanza. That assertiveness, that slightly-hesitant but still certain voice.
