Kári Tulinius ([info]kattullus) wrote,
@ 2005-10-30 20:42:00
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This is How You Read; Can You Count?


The Age of Pisces is all of history and I am the history of the Jazz Age dancing on tables just me and Zelda charlestoning backwards away from Piscis Borealis into Piscis Occidentalis slippin slidin jumpin from table to table peeing on jeune Arthur peeing on everybody else swimming in literature beaching with the obese Eros wallowing on the sand with the crawling eye I crawling towards the head of the table past silent immobile legs suggesting that I will end my night like this

Sleep comes angry roaring bellows blowing heat into iron the hammer the hammer iron into steel a compound I will compound like an eye I refuse to resort to similes to explain my dreamy anger to you as we bop bop bopping along with the beat skipping when we feel like taking leave of gravity this was not not a simile as I grab your hand and twirl and do the twist again Chubby Eros checkering the dancefloor as we run along the table slipping on heaved plates tumbling towards the floor

The sun rises in Pisces but you and I know it's arbitrary like the order of letters in words or the selection of words to be sentenced by the eye I am led away by Lorca telling me not to come along or else I'll be an extra in the movie of his death that I saw as a child long before I danced with him in New York impersonating women impersonating boys bathing in showers of blood and numbered among the golden hurricanes lashing the belly of a new Age arriving in the 22nd Century

Trimalchio is waiting in a room for his party to result in me inserted into his life so that I can eulogize him into greatness but I will skip past his chair dragging Zelda into the guest room stabbing Eros ripping out his innards and interspersing sex with haruspicy as we read the lines we drew from his gut the entrails trailed by the eye I have learned how to read and I count myself as history lying on a tiled floor passing out furiously expelling the Age through the mouth



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[info]_ruse
2005-10-31 02:01 am UTC (link)
Haruspicy is one of my favourite things; not literally of course. Metaphorically speaking. I really like the fusion of time and narratives in this piece especially.

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[info]kattullus
2005-10-31 02:53 am UTC (link)
In this poem I sought to embody time, that is make time a messy, physical substance, like vomit or guts or pee.

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[info]_ruse
2005-10-31 02:57 am UTC (link)
akin to Acker slightly, a bit, in this piece, too. Body fluids aside even!

(and yes: I am awake; don't even get me started on it. God.)

I do like this piece a lot though.

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[info]kattullus
2005-10-31 03:05 am UTC (link)
Thank you. I appreciate that.

(I won't mention the fact that you're awake. Not even to God.)

I really must read Acker. I've been meaning to for a long time (since I found out she was the inspiration for Neil Gaiman's Delirium).

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[info]_ruse
2005-10-31 03:07 am UTC (link)
I'd recommend, for a first Acker, either Blood and Guts in High School, or, my favourite, In Memoriam to Identity.

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[info]_ruse
2005-10-31 03:07 am UTC (link)
p.s. - For Rimbaud, check out the latter book first. Yes, yes.

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[info]kattullus
2005-10-31 03:08 am UTC (link)
I'll make a note of that!

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[info]grapefruitmoon
2005-10-31 02:18 am UTC (link)
I think I'd like it better without the peeing. :)

( :Þ )

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[info]kattullus
2005-10-31 02:51 am UTC (link)
Rimbaud pees on everyone! It's his gift to history.

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[info]corbistheca
2005-10-31 02:53 am UTC (link)
i like the flow of the words but some places i get confused i think it's the absence of punctuation sometimes i keep having to go back and read the same sentence twice three times four

have to confess i agree with sonja regarding the peeing

i like the blurriness that sometimes startles into clarity especially angry roaring sleep and the lashing golden hurricanes and furiously expelling the Age

had to look up haruspicy which isn't in my dictionary but haruspex was and that made the final paragraph make much more sense though already the trailed entrails might have been my favorite part

wheeee!

~ c.

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[info]kattullus
2005-10-31 03:03 am UTC (link)
Well, if I'm gonna invoke Rimbaud I can't very well have him doing something reputable, can I? Or doing something reputable to him? :)

I appreciate the fact that you take the time to go back and read the sentences over.

Haruspicy has to be there, it's dictated by the logic of sounds (I feel), "interspersing sex" just calls it into being. To me 'haruspicy' also echoes with 'history'.

And thanks for noticing that I was trying to create stark clarity among blurriness. I was trying to mimic the memory of drunkeness.

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[info]corbistheca
2005-10-31 02:11 pm UTC (link)
oh, i like haruspicy! well, the use of the word in this piece, anyway. the fact that the word's not in my dictionary just shows that my dictionary's not as cool as it thinks it is.

regarding peeing, looking back over this again i'm struck by how much of the piece is yellow, starting with the pee -- even though you've got quite a bit of blood here and there, the predominant color is still not red. which is funny.

and yay! i noticed the right thing!

~ c.

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[info]kattullus
2005-10-31 06:45 pm UTC (link)
I hadn't noticed the color thing. That's interesting. Thanks.

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